Here's what happened after the first re-draft. Like I mentioned, I've made Peter much more insolent. Other than one or two tweaks the big changes are all in the first scene really.
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https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Enter%20the%20Bucket%202nd%20Draft.pdf?w=ba4daeb4
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