Here are the third and fourth drafts. The fourth has only a few slight changes to the third. However there have been some major changes between the second and third. Basically I've had to make the thing a hell of a lot shorter so that this film will be the appropriate film festival length. This has resulted in a whole scene being turned into a montage sequence and the scenes before the credits being halved.
To help me cut things down I broke down each scene into it's key events.
And here are the drafts. You'll need a dropbox account to view the link.
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Enter%20the%20Bucket%20%284th%20Draft%29.pdf?w=d4611e43
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