After finishing my first draft I had a little look over it. My tutor suggested making the protagonist more of a dislikable person and I agreed so I looked carefully at the first scene, which is where we see our protagonist's dislikable character shown most prominently. I drew out a timeline of the 1st draft scene and one of how I wanted the 2nd draft to pan out.
On top of that, here's a link to my first draft, you'll need a dropbox account to view it.
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Enter%20The%20Bucket%201st%20Draft.pdf?w=3fdac79d
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